pectinetass
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Bonjour,
Je dois présenter une entreprise fictive à l'oral. J'ai deja preparer ce que j'allais dire mais etant mauvaise en anglais j'ai peur qu'il y ait beaucoup trop de fautes de syntaxe. Pouvez vous me dire ce que vous en pensez svp ?
"The company is called Bijoubox. It creates jewels since nineteen eighty nine and its skills is internationally recognized. It proposed a large range which is adapted for all and for every desire. Bijoubox mades itself its products in its workshop of Poitiers. It works with precious materials like gold, silver, precious stones and semiprecious. Theirs products are light, soft and sold without bonding, so their jewels are very pleasant to wear.
The company employs twenty four employees. The managing director is Jean Pierre Labronche. His assistante is Marie Wacquer. Then, there is Paul Nadeau, the manager of communication and export who manages four employees. The head of shipping department is Paul Beaumont and he manages two packers. Annie Deweyre is the designer. She manages ten jewellers. Evelyne Lemaire and Chrystel Delambre are receptionists. There is a manager of'foreign affaires who names is Catherine May and there is a webmaster and graphic designer who called Vincent Panas.
Bijoubox have a website and it's possible to order on line twenty four hourd a day, seven days a week. The store permits to search by jewel or price range. You can find on the website all of the offer : jewels in diamonds or gold or silver, engagement ring, wedding ring and another rings. The minimum order amount is thirty euros. A quotation will be sent to the customer. Generally, the delivery dates are contained between three and eight weeks for customized creations. And about basic creations, the delivery dates is two days. For the order between thirty and one hundred euros, you have to pay eight euros of shipping charges. For the order higher than one hundred euros, you have to pay fifty euros by registered Colissimo with signing in France. Shipping chanfes are different for international. We dispatch your order when we receive the paymént. On this matter, you can pay online or you can send by post office a cheque payable to Bijoubox sarl. Also, it's possible to pay with the Fidelia card. The paiement is secure and if you arent satisfied, the company pay back you."
En vius remerciant d'avance pour vos reponses !
Cordialement
Je dois présenter une entreprise fictive à l'oral. J'ai deja preparer ce que j'allais dire mais etant mauvaise en anglais j'ai peur qu'il y ait beaucoup trop de fautes de syntaxe. Pouvez vous me dire ce que vous en pensez svp ?
"The company is called Bijoubox. It creates jewels since nineteen eighty nine and its skills is internationally recognized. It proposed a large range which is adapted for all and for every desire. Bijoubox mades itself its products in its workshop of Poitiers. It works with precious materials like gold, silver, precious stones and semiprecious. Theirs products are light, soft and sold without bonding, so their jewels are very pleasant to wear.
The company employs twenty four employees. The managing director is Jean Pierre Labronche. His assistante is Marie Wacquer. Then, there is Paul Nadeau, the manager of communication and export who manages four employees. The head of shipping department is Paul Beaumont and he manages two packers. Annie Deweyre is the designer. She manages ten jewellers. Evelyne Lemaire and Chrystel Delambre are receptionists. There is a manager of'foreign affaires who names is Catherine May and there is a webmaster and graphic designer who called Vincent Panas.
Bijoubox have a website and it's possible to order on line twenty four hourd a day, seven days a week. The store permits to search by jewel or price range. You can find on the website all of the offer : jewels in diamonds or gold or silver, engagement ring, wedding ring and another rings. The minimum order amount is thirty euros. A quotation will be sent to the customer. Generally, the delivery dates are contained between three and eight weeks for customized creations. And about basic creations, the delivery dates is two days. For the order between thirty and one hundred euros, you have to pay eight euros of shipping charges. For the order higher than one hundred euros, you have to pay fifty euros by registered Colissimo with signing in France. Shipping chanfes are different for international. We dispatch your order when we receive the paymént. On this matter, you can pay online or you can send by post office a cheque payable to Bijoubox sarl. Also, it's possible to pay with the Fidelia card. The paiement is secure and if you arent satisfied, the company pay back you."
En vius remerciant d'avance pour vos reponses !
Cordialement
