Correction d'un paragraphe en anglais

#1
Salut,

Quelqu'un pourrais t-il corriger mon paragraphe je l'ai traduire en anglais et je sais pa si c'est bon  :embarassed:


We are a family among which two adults and two children. We would like go to two weeks in the wales so as to visit the site "Heritage Coast" situated on the south coast between Pwlldu Head and Salthouse Point.
We would like to go at Cardiff by plane rent a spacious car for two weeks. On the other hand, we shall stay one day at Cardiff visit the city and the surroundings.

Merci  :arrow2:
 
#3
KissGirl link=topic=18306.msg166009#msg166009 date=1142007624 a dit:
Salut,

Quelqu'un pourrais t-il corriger mon paragraphe je l'ai traduire en anglais et je sais pa si c'est bon  :embarassed:


We are a family among which two adults and two children with two adults and two children. We would like to go to two weeks in the wales to Wales for two weeks so as to visit the site "Heritage Coast" situated located on the south coast between Pwlldu Head and Salthouse Point.
We would like to go to Cardiff by plane and rent a spacious car for two weeks. On the other hand, we shall stay one day at in  Cardiff to visit the city and the surroundings.
 

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