BESOIN D AIDE POUR TRADUCTION DE PRESENTATION D ENTREPRISE

[cathie44]

Bonjour, une personne peut-elle corriger mes erreurs SVP j ai beaucoup de mal à faire ma présentation d'entreprise en anglais :

Actually, I prepare BTS assistant management (je ne sais pas comment le traduire) in the firm X. X is located in Nantes. The type of business's firm is the trade industrial. Or rather, the firm import the industrial machine in CHINE and sold in FRANCE. The number iof employees is 17. It is a small family business. For me, work is very interresent because it is diversified. My work is divided into three different areas: administrative, accounting and commercial. For example, I prepare orders suppliers and customers, I answered the telephone, I do offer prices to our customers ... At the end of my contract, the manager of the company offered me to stay in business . I accepted well and I am very satisfied with my work.

Merci d'avance pour votre aide

 

[kathounette]

J'ai essaye de corriger, mais je pense qu'il faudrait etoffer un peu.

I currently do a BTS assistant management in the firm X which is located in Nantes.

It is an industrial trade company which imports industrial machines from China and sell it in France. Moreover, it is a small family business with 17 employees.

My work is really interesting because it is diversified. My work is divided into three different areas: administrative, accounting and commercial.
For example, I prepare orders suppliers and customers, I answered the telephone, I do offer prices to our customers ... (more examples will be better)
At the end of my contract, the manager of the company offered me to stay in his enterprise and I accepted because it is a very pleasant job.
Finally, I am very satisfied with my work and it gives me an exciting experience.

 

[cathie44]

Merci beaucoup pour ton aide, je vais etoffer au niveau de mes différentes fonctions.

 

[kathounette]

Merci beaucoup pour ton aide, je vais etoffer au niveau de mes différentes fonctions.

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