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coucou tous les BTS!!!!
je voudrais savoir si ya quelqun de bilingue ( en anglais) parmi vous?
car je voudrais corriger des textes de traduction ( jvous rassure pas long) car je ne peu pas savoir les fautes que je peu faire!!
enfin bref si quelqun veu bien maidez ( et kil a du temps, un peu)
venez!!
merci beaucoup
et profitez de cette belle journée :wink2:
 
moi aussi je peux t'aider, j'ai passé un an aux USA après mon bac. Au plaisir de pouvoir t'aider :wink2:
 
alr voila mon texte!!!
bonne chance;
i passed a technical a levels last year.
i chose to prepare a buissiness communication BETC because i had an opportunity in department communication in order to carry out a study programm trainning
indeed, i wish for acquire skills a real professional experience and maturity
i think that it's the best way to learn how to communicate in the profesionnal world.
it is a area where you can discover much but i think apprentiship system is harder because you have to be an employee and a student in the same time.
i want to work in advertising or gaphism because i like create new things.
i work for Arkema, a chemical company. the plant where i work is located in jarrie, next to grenoble. in this plant, internal and external communication are very important because the population around the plnat must feel in security and employees ask to be inform of all what's happened in the company.
my work is to do the house bulletin, i have to interwieud employees and take fotos to write articles. moreover i uptade the intranet site white dreamweaver software programm


MERCI
 
Ive passed technical levels last year.
I prepare a business communication BETC because i had an opportunity in the communication department to (ou for??)carry out a study program training(pas sure?)
Indeed, i want to acquire a real professional experience and maturity(skills of what?)
I think that's the best way to learn how to communicate in the professional world.
It's an area where you can discover much(lots of things) but i think apprenticeship (initiation ??)system is harder(ou hard tout court?) because &quot;you have to be&quot; (you are both:) employee and a student in the same time.
I want to work in advertising or gaphism because i like to create new things.
I'm working for Arkema, a chemical company. The plant (where i work pas besoin de répéter)) is located in Jarrie, next to Grenoble. In this plant, internal and external communication are very important because the population around must feel safe,and moreover employees want to know what happens in the company.
My work is to do the house bulletin, i have to interview employees and take fotos for (newspaper?)article.I also update the internet site white dreamweaver software programm(??)

Voila j'ai fais mon possible..Cependant je pense qu'il y doit y avoir qqs erreurs qd mm..Des fois c'est correct dans l'othogrphe et grammaire, mais ca fait trop Anglais école. Apres demande a qqn d'autre ce qu'il en pense!!
 
:fleche: c'est pas si mal que ça :smile:
I have passed a technical A Level last year.
I have chosen to prepare a business communication BETC because i had an opportunity to carry out a study program training in a Communication departement
Indeed, I want to acquire professional skills, a real professional experience and maturity.
i think that it's the best way to learn how to communicate in the professional world.
it is a area where you can discover much but i think a day-release based training is harder because you have to be an employee and a student at the same time.
I want to work in advertising or graphism because i like to create new things.
I am working for Arkema, a company specialized in chemicals (sinon, une compagnie chimique, ça n'a pas trop de sens). the plant is located in jJrrie, next to Grenoble. Internal and external communication are very important in this plant because the population living close to the plant must feel safe and employees require to be informed of everything that is happening in the company.
I am in charge of preparing the house bulletin, i have to interview employees and take pictures in order to write articles. Moreover, i have to uptade the intranet site with the Dreamweaver software program.
 
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je te remercie beaucoup annabelle! c'est gentil d'avoir passé du temp dessus, et c'est clair, ca a l'air plus anglais! lol!!
hesite pa a demander de laide si tu ve ( dans d'autres matieres !!!)
bonne journée

:blush:
 
Juste une petite faute que je n'avais pas vu :

it is an area where you can discover much

De rien, c'est un plaisir, hésite pas si tu as de nouveau besoin. :biggrin:

Pour les autres matières, ca devrait aller! merci quand même
 
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