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Ma lettre en anglais est elle correcte ?

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Paris, 18th December 2004.


MARY’S SCHOOL
129 Strathmore House
CAMBRIDGE CB4 2HU


Dear friends,

Object : Stay in Barcelona

As you know, we are organizing a stay in Barcelona with the aim of meeting our Spanish correspondents.

We conceived a descriptive brochure that we are glad to send you. You will find some photos of the city but also the diverse activities there which we can make during this stay such as the visit of monuments. This document can possibly help you to prepare the journey.

Furthermore we remind you that this stay will take place from 23 to 29 March 2005 and you have the possibility to contact us on this number

01.40..........

Looking forward to see you in Barcelona.

Best regards,

Your French friends




Enc: Brochure of Barcelona
 
Hello,

Bon j'arrive pas à mettre bien en forme mais voilà, à gauche c'est le destinataire de la lettre, à droite c'est l'expediteur... la date en dessous de l'expediteur, et l'objet à gauche sous le destinataire.

MARY’S SCHOOL
129 Strathmore House
CAMBRIDGE CB4 2HU

Paris, 18th December 2004.



Dear friends,

Re : Trip to Barcelona

As you know, we are organizing a trip to Barcelona with the aim of meeting our Spanish correspondents.

We are glad to sent you the descriptive brochure we have realized. You will find not only some photos of the city but also the various activities we can enjoy during our stay, such as visiting monuments. This document can possibly help you to prepare the journey in the best way possible.

Furthermore we remind you that this stay will take place from 23 to 29 March 2005, please feel free to contact us on the following number :

01.40..........

Looking forward to seeing you in Barcelona.

Best regards,

Your French friends




Enc: Brochure of Barcelona
 
EN TETE​

18th September 2004.

MARY’S SCHOOL
129 Strathmore House
CAMBRIDGE CB4 2HU


Dear friends,

STAY IN BARCELONA

As you know, we are organizing a stay in Barcelona with the aim of meeting our Spanish correspondents.

We conceived a descriptive brochure that we are glad to send you. You will find some photos of the city but also the diverse activities there which we can make during this stay such as the visit of monuments. This document can possibly help you to prepare the journey.

Furthermore we remind you that this stay will take place from 23 to 29 March 2005 and you have the possibility to contact us on this number

01.40......​

Looking forward to see you in Barcelona.

Best regards,

Your French friends



Enc: Brochure of Barcelona

Adresse de l'emetteur en pied de page​


Voila donc en fait que j'en demandais si c'etait bon c'etait au niveau des fautes aussi :)
 
happy link=topic=27694.msg253229#msg253229 date=1149016147 a dit:
Voila donc en fait que j'en demandais si c'etait bon c'etait au niveau des fautes aussi :)
Cliquez pour agrandir...
Je m'en doutais mais bon, je n'ai pas un niveau excellent...
A la place de &quot;journey&quot;, je mettrai &quot;trip&quot; =&gt; je me souviens avoir fait cette erreur et de voir mon prof me l'a corrigée ainsi. Peut-être que je me trompe mais ce n'est pas du mot à mot la traduction (pour la plupart) ?
 
MARY’S SCHOOL
129 Strathmore House
CAMBRIDGE CB4 2HU

Paris, 18th December 2004.

Object : Trip to Barcelona

Dear friends,

As you know, we are organizing a trip to Barcelona in order to meet our Spanish correspondents.

We are glad to send you the descriptive brochure we have realized. You will not only some photos of the city but you will also be able to take a look at the various activities we can enjoy during our stay, such as visiting monuments. This document may help you with the preparation of the journey.

Furthermore, we remind you that this stay will last from 23 to 29 March 2005, please feel free to contact us at the following number :

01.40..........

Looking forward to seeing you in Barcelona.

Best regards,

Your French friends




Enc: Brochure of Barcelona
 
sekhmet278 link=topic=27694.msg254144#msg254144 date=1149071765 a dit:
Je m'en doutais mais bon, je n'ai pas un niveau excellent...
A la place de &quot;journey&quot;, je mettrai &quot;trip&quot; =&gt; je me souviens avoir fait cette erreur et de voir mon prof me l'a corrigée ainsi. Peut-être que je me trompe mais ce n'est pas du mot à mot la traduction (pour la plupart) ?
Cliquez pour agrandir...

En effet, j'ai loupé celui là... journey a plus le sens de trajet.... seulement trip est répété... alors
This document can possibly help you to prepare the stay.
 
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