besoin d'aide pour demain

[louna411]

Voilà j'ai préparé le bts par un GRETA en 8 mois et pas de cours d'anglais, j'ai deux petits soucis

-Comment dit on BTS CGO en ANglais

-Et comment dit-on ce texte est extrait d'un livre dont le titre est .... écrit par ..... (oui je sais c'est la honte mais je ne me rappelle plus du tout de la formule exacte) :blush:

 

[louna411]

et euh si cela n'est pas trop demander et si une bonne âme toute gentille passe par ici avant demain pour me dire si mon petit texte est correct cela serait super méga aorable et me sauverait un minimum de l'echec total en anglais.

J’ai préparé mon BTS par le biais du GRETA. Cette formation professionnelle, s ‘est déroulée sur 8 mois. Durant cette formation j’ai effectué mon stage au sein du Cabinet EVS Expertise, à Metz. Ce Cabinet, est spécialisé dans l’étude des comptes et bilans d’entreprises pour le compte des Institutions représentatives du personnel.
Pendant ce stage, j’ai énormément appris et j’ai également pu améliorer mes connaissances au niveau social et au niveau économique.
En effet, les dossiers sont préparés dans un ensemble, et ça n’est pas seulement les comptes des entreprises qui sont présentés mais toute l’analyse socio-économique du secteur d’activité du client qui est décryptée et analysée afin de présenter la situation de l’entreprise dans son ensemble.
Le Cabinet intervient aussi sur demande des Comités d’Entreprise sur les licenciements économiques, afin de fournir aux représentants du personnel, une analyse objective de la situation.
Ce stage m’a été très bénéfique et au terme de ces 8 semaines, le directeur du Cabinet m’a proposé une offre d’emploi, que je me suis empressée d’accepter.


I prepared my BTS by means of a GRETA. This vocational training took place during 8 months. During this training, I did my training period within EVS Expertise in Metz. This office is specialized in companies’ results and accounts for employees’ representative institutions.
During this training period, I enormously learned and I could improve my knowledge up to standard social and economic.
The files are working as a whole and it is not only the companies’ accounts who are explaining even worse all the company’s activity socioeconomic analyze.
The office works for works council to help them during a lay-off, to give an unbiased company’s accounts analyze.
This training period was very beneficial for me, and after this 8 weeks, the office director putted an employ and I hastened to say yes.





Merci

 

[Grenat]

Pour répondre à ta 1ere question (sur la présentation du texte) voici comment je procède, sachant que je suis en BTS AG :


This article, extracted from X, a british / american newspaper, dates back to and was written by X.
It is entitled X and deals with (et la, tu annonces l'idée générale et ton plan)


Pour ce qui est de la correction :

I prepared am preparing (c'est encore le cas) my BTS (ca ne se dit pas en anglais, dit plutot "my two years diploma&quot by means of a thanks to the GRETA.

This My vocational training took place lasted 8 months. During this training professional experience (pour éviter les répétitions), I did my training period within worked for EVS Expertise in (the town of) Metz.

This office firm (office=bureau) is specialized in companies’ results (?) and accounts for employees’ representative institutions.
During this training period, I enormously learned a lot and I could improved my knowledge up to standard social and economic.

The files are working as a whole and it is not only the companies’ accounts who are explaining even worse all the company’s activity socioeconomic analyze. (désolée je ne comrpends pas la phrase)

The office firm works for works councils to help them during a lay-off so as / in order to give an unbiased company’s accounts analyze.

This training period was very beneficial (ca veut dire "avantageux" il me semble) for me, and after this 8 weeks, the office director putted an employ offered me a position / a job, and I hastened to say yes.



Merci  :fleche: de rien ^^

Bon j'espère avoir pu t'aider  :friend: et avoir bien corrigé ^^
D'autres avis sont les bienvenus !

Un conseil : privilégie des phrases moins complexes et donc plus faciles à dire à l'oral, ca t'évitera de t'embrouiller


Bon courage !!!

 

[badadaboum]

non je pense pas, moi j'ai dit ça, mais j'avais appris plus, j'ai raccourci (y a de fautes là j'ai pu la version sans faute sur pc)

My training toolk place at the ********company for ten weeks.
It is specializes in industrial tools business. The business has been started in 1946. It is a Joint-Stock company. The seat of **** is located in Reims. In this seat, there are a shop, logistic, and a commercial and accountancy department. In addition to five agencies: Reims, Troyes, Châlons, Charleville-Meizières, Metz.
The company part of the group ******** . ************* has a turnovers of 24 160 000€.
There are 128 salaried. ****** Industrie is subject of corporation tax, but, this company has an operating loss, so, it doesn’t pay the corporation tax.
Primarily, I work in retailer accountancy.

My mentor is ******. He is the corporate finance manager. He supervised me, he tolds me the task are me attributed, the goal…

Everyday, I opened, sort out the mail. My tasks have been seizure and checking invoice, tax office, export and import declaration, VAT return, general charges….
in a first time: I have seized invoices and financial resources. In a second time, I checked invoice.
At last, after the answer, I confirm invoice, for the payment, or, I send a disagreement sheet of provider.

The problem is the delay and the lack of maintenance retailer (price of article) and this department has changed of program.
To save time my mentor changes several once the method of work. Necessary adapt oneself.


On the one hand, training can use the theory learned in the classroom. On the other land, training creates an experience, that can easier the entry into labour market.
My training bringed a practical aspect, experience. This stage allowed discover a company word and the strong point necessary (manage stress, the overwork…)


Finally, after a BTS, I consider in the accountancy, and, for that, continued by alternative DCG.