Bonjour à tous,
Voilà... J-6 avant l'oral d'anglais et j'essaye de la préparer comme je peu... mais surtout grâce à ce forum !!!
Pour une fille qui ne sais pas alligner deux mots en anglais je vais presenter le texte ci-dessous,
alors s'il vous plaît pouvez vous me corriger !!!
My name is __________ . I'm sales for student in the hight school ____________ .
I'mcarried out all my training in the firm __________________, an estate agent's.
I'm carried 16 weeks of training in this company.
I usually strat work at 10 o'clock and finished at 19 o'clock but it depends on the workload.
Our customers are all the private individuals who wishes to buy or sell a real estate.
During this training, i was in charge of searching houses to sell in the sector of agent's. I also visited houses and appartements to customers and i prospected to new customers. For that all i use the computer and the phone all time.
The training period enjoy me because i like to have contact and negociate with the other
I like this job because it is an enriching experience for my futur and i think it's a good way to link pratical and theorical aspect in my study.
As the conclusin, this experience encouraged me to take responsabilities and i'll say that i'm very motivate to continue in this job.
It was a great experience for me.
Merci d'avoir eû le courage de lire mon résumé.
QU'EN PENSEZ VOUS ?
Voilà... J-6 avant l'oral d'anglais et j'essaye de la préparer comme je peu... mais surtout grâce à ce forum !!!
Pour une fille qui ne sais pas alligner deux mots en anglais je vais presenter le texte ci-dessous,
alors s'il vous plaît pouvez vous me corriger !!!
My name is __________ . I'm sales for student in the hight school ____________ .
I'mcarried out all my training in the firm __________________, an estate agent's.
I'm carried 16 weeks of training in this company.
I usually strat work at 10 o'clock and finished at 19 o'clock but it depends on the workload.
Our customers are all the private individuals who wishes to buy or sell a real estate.
During this training, i was in charge of searching houses to sell in the sector of agent's. I also visited houses and appartements to customers and i prospected to new customers. For that all i use the computer and the phone all time.
The training period enjoy me because i like to have contact and negociate with the other
I like this job because it is an enriching experience for my futur and i think it's a good way to link pratical and theorical aspect in my study.
As the conclusin, this experience encouraged me to take responsabilities and i'll say that i'm very motivate to continue in this job.
It was a great experience for me.
Merci d'avoir eû le courage de lire mon résumé.
QU'EN PENSEZ VOUS ?