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[hellsteph]

Bonjour, pouvez vous me donner votre avis sur mon speech pour mon oral de demain concernant ce que j'ai fait en stage ?


I did my work placement as relationship & negotiation Assistant with the firm from Credit Mutuel Bank to Nangis.I was a commercial trainee.The implementation of a prospecting to develop loyalty of our customers. J " began by sorting out files prospects to establish targets. Then I phoned to the customers chosen to obtain meetings(appointments) during which I their proposed products adapted to their needs. This action(share) allowed to sign 22 long-term contracts what correspond to the fixed objectives.It was very enriching because i was polyvalent and autonomous and i want to apply for a job of commercial to this firm.
Merci d'avance[/]

 

[Marya72]

Bonjour, pouvez vous me donner votre avis sur mon speech pour mon oral de demain concernant ce que j'ai fait en stage ?


I did my work placement as relationship & negotiation Assistant with the firm for Credit Mutuel Bank in Nangis.I was a commercial trainee in charge of implementing a prospecting to develop loyalty of our customers. J " began by sorting out files prospects to establish targets. Then I phoned the chosen customers to obtain meetings(appointments) during which I proposed them products adapted to their needs. This action(share) allowed us to sign 22 long-term contracts which correspond to the fixed objectives.It was very enriching because i was polyvalent and autonomous and i want to apply for a job of commercial to this firm.
Merci d'avance[/]

You want to apply for a job => on t'a proposé un poste?

 

[hellsteph]

merci pour ta réponse, non je veut poser ma candidature :blush: