developpement anglais : programme santé pour lutter contre le stress au travail

[missrnbdu84]

Voila je dois faire un développement sur ce sujet et la question est : do you think employees are helped or exploited by these pratices?
le texte en faite nous donne un exemple d'un homme stréssé qui c'est orienté vers le yoga et les séances de relaxation pour pouvoir calmer son stress. On nous dit que plusieurs programme ont du coup été crée pour lutter contre le stress : tai shi etc....
et des chercheurs nous disent que c thérapies ne dureront pas longtemps, les employés seront toujours stréssé à long terme
c'est un bref résumé que je vous fait
alors mon plan est
I) ces programes les aides
II) ces programmes les exploitent

et je n'arrive pas à dégager les idées pour les deux parties, j'ai essayé mais rien
alors pouvez vous m'aider
merci d'avance :wink:

 

[missrnbdu84]

un petit up on ne sait jamais :wink:
bon pour la premiére partie j'ai mes idées mais il me manque juste à démontrer qu'ils sont exploités mais j'ai rien trouvé sur le net.

 

[melboi]

Hey,

Peut-être tu l'as déjà fini maintenant mais...

Exploité - ils seront peut-être exploité au niveau d'un contrat moral. Les employées se sentiront obligés de rester suite à l'aide que l'entreprise leur a donné? ils se sentiront comme ils ne peuvent pas demander une augmentation de salaire car l'entreprise a déjà payé pour leur séances de destressing?

Otherwise my dear, I'm afraid I've got no idea! Maybe they are just not being exploited by the companies??? and it's an all-round good thing?

 

[missrnbdu84]

merci à toi tu m'as données une bonne idée
non c pas encore trop tard, je dois le lui envoyé par email aujourd'hui

 

[imported_kristen]

ces programmes les exploitent :

tu peux mettre que c'est de la poudre aux yeux
que ça ne suffit pas

ces programmes les aide :
tu mets qu'un employé détendu est + productif (du coup l'entreprise pense à ses intérêts me diras tu)
que bien des pays adaptent leurs méthodes de travail : micro siestes, gym douce pour que les employés se sentent mieux

 

[missrnbdu84]

Bon j'ai terminé le developpement alors qu'en pensez vous de mon boulot :
In the late of 1990, a new health program was expanding in the USA to fight against stress workers. Many companies decided to invest in these sorts of services. We can wonder if employees are really helped or exploited by these practices.
For that, we will show in a first part, how these health programs are effective, and then how workers are exploited.
Thanks to these practices, many stressed workers improved their health at work. Indeed, these therapies consisting in introduce in their life a break time and silence permit them after that, feel well-being and permit them to reduce stress until the end of time work week.

Moreover, workers are more productive, because they are motivated, they don’t feel obligated to work but we can say, thanks to that, they work with pleasure.


Even thought, they feel and work better, why they can feel exploited?

First of all, according to researches, theses sorts of services, could not lasting a long-time. Thereby, workers could feel less stressed during a few times and could relapse after, so it will affect their work, they would be not as motivated as before.
Furthermore, like these therapies are free, we could wonder if there is a contract of moral between workers and their employees. Indeed, workers could be debtor to their employees for the rendered service, they could not leave their job because of that. Moreover, we can wonder, if a wage increase could not be a good means to motivate them.

To conclude, we can say that these sorts of services could have a good effect at first, could help them to feel better but cold not be the best mean to help them. Araise their wage, maybe could motivated them

 

[missrnbdu84]

Bah y'a personne qui veut me lire :cry:

 

[melboi]

Hi here are some corrections for you (there wasn't that much to correct!) :


In late 1990, a new health program was expanding in the USA to fight against overly stressed workers. Many companies chose to invest in this kind of program. This leads us to ask the question if employees are really helped or exploited by these practices.

In order to answer this question we will see firstly how these health programs are effective, and secondly how these programs may be exploitative.

Thanks to these practices, many stressed workers improved their health at work. Indeed, these therapies consisted in introducing into their life a time of break and silence which then permitted them a feeling of well-being. This also brought on a reduction in the amount of stress felt by the employee during their working week.

Moreover, workers are more productive, because they are motivated, however they don’t feel obliged to work. We can say though, that thanks to this increased level of motivation that the employees go about their tasks with a hightened level of pleasure.

Even though, they feel and work better, why could they feel exploited?

First of all, according to research these sorts of services would not last a long-time. Therefore the workers could feel less stressed during a short period but fall back into old patterns afterwards, thus their work will be affected and they would be not as motivated as before.

Furthermore, since these therapies are free, we could ask the question if there is a moral contract between workers and their employees. Indeed, workers could be in debt to their employers for the service given. They would feel apprehension in leaving their current job because of this moral contract. Moreover, we could ask the question if simply a wage increase could be a good means to motivate them.

To conclude, we can say that these sorts of services could have a good effect at first, could help them to feel better but there could be other ways to provide this outcome. A raise in their wage, could maybe be another way to motivate them.




Dis-moi si tu pense que j'ai mal changé quelque chose et je te dirai pourquoi je l'ai mis comme ça.

Le texte que t'avais écrit était vachement bien. Si seulement je pourrais écrire en Français comme tu écris en Anglais.

Cya

 

[missrnbdu84]

MERCI!!!!!!
tu m'as bien corrigé jt'adore !!!
c'est bon je peux le refiler à mon frére je te dirais combien il a eu :wink: