STEPHIE 67
New Member
bonjour,
est-ce que qq'un pourrait m'aider a corriger ma présentation d'anglais ?
je sais pas si les phrases sont justes et surtout la conjugaison des verbes !!!
je précise que je suis en BTS AG par alternance et que mon contrat se termine en aout donc après l'épreuve d'anglais oral.
Est-il approprié dans mon cas, de dire "training period" ou "work experience" ??
good morning,
my name is stéphanie, i'm twenty years old. I live in ... next to Strasbourg. I'm doing a higher education course by sandwich course to become a P.A.
I have started my training period on september the 15th 2004 at IRCOS.
IRCOS is located in Strasbourg (sixty seven department).
there are 33 employees in three differents compagnies.
It's a association for the alsace works council. The association's members are the works council and their employees have got a Cezam card.
The IRCOS's business are the sale of tickets, training for the staff representatives and to design and construction the travels for the members.
In 2005, IRCOS has got 640 members.
During my paid work experience, i stay in the travel sector and my tutor is Virginie M.
She's perso in charge for travel sector.
In this sector, we are 4 employees.
I worked of wednesday to friday when i went at school and now, i work the every day of the week.
i have got a luncheon voucher and i have got a Cezam card too.
My work are to realise and to prepare travels, to answer the phone, i make travel's books like "guide du routard" and a telephone survey.
To me, this 2 years at IRCOS will allow me to discover the field of tourism.
Finally, the travel sector is very well to develop because the turnover rises each years.
I choose an higher education course by sandwich course because i wanted to have experience on the job. After this experience, i will search a job in the company.
My dream is to open a bar or a small business.
Voila pouvez vous me dire si il y a des fautes et me les corriger ? merci beaucoup...
comment on dit : je travaille de 13h30 à 17h30 ?
et j'aimerais savoir si c mieux de dire "luncheon voucher" ou "meal ticket" qui est plutot US
merci
est-ce que qq'un pourrait m'aider a corriger ma présentation d'anglais ?
je sais pas si les phrases sont justes et surtout la conjugaison des verbes !!!
je précise que je suis en BTS AG par alternance et que mon contrat se termine en aout donc après l'épreuve d'anglais oral.
Est-il approprié dans mon cas, de dire "training period" ou "work experience" ??
good morning,
my name is stéphanie, i'm twenty years old. I live in ... next to Strasbourg. I'm doing a higher education course by sandwich course to become a P.A.
I have started my training period on september the 15th 2004 at IRCOS.
IRCOS is located in Strasbourg (sixty seven department).
there are 33 employees in three differents compagnies.
It's a association for the alsace works council. The association's members are the works council and their employees have got a Cezam card.
The IRCOS's business are the sale of tickets, training for the staff representatives and to design and construction the travels for the members.
In 2005, IRCOS has got 640 members.
During my paid work experience, i stay in the travel sector and my tutor is Virginie M.
She's perso in charge for travel sector.
In this sector, we are 4 employees.
I worked of wednesday to friday when i went at school and now, i work the every day of the week.
i have got a luncheon voucher and i have got a Cezam card too.
My work are to realise and to prepare travels, to answer the phone, i make travel's books like "guide du routard" and a telephone survey.
To me, this 2 years at IRCOS will allow me to discover the field of tourism.
Finally, the travel sector is very well to develop because the turnover rises each years.
I choose an higher education course by sandwich course because i wanted to have experience on the job. After this experience, i will search a job in the company.
My dream is to open a bar or a small business.
Voila pouvez vous me dire si il y a des fautes et me les corriger ? merci beaucoup...
comment on dit : je travaille de 13h30 à 17h30 ?
et j'aimerais savoir si c mieux de dire "luncheon voucher" ou "meal ticket" qui est plutot US
merci